Thanks SoulReaper
Kukulkan wrote:
The song is missing some structure. Is there a refrain or something recogniceable and repeating? I recognice an intro, some chords, an interlude and a part with the lead melody. Maybe you can give the song more structure?
I agree. The song structure is one of those things one has to learn.
Beginning at 01:06 and 03:00 the hihat is sounding like a metronome. Try working with different velocity-values in the hihat-groove. Or try some open/closed hihat-scheme.
Yeah i will have a look at that.
The bridge-noise from 01:51 is to loud and sounds much to 'sharp'. Try some lowpass-filter.
Yeah i had a problem; the compressor kicks out there. There is an "enourmous" ammout of compression on this whole track and when the bassdrum and the bass itself stops; the strings are winded up. I got to make a lowpass filter kick in before then;
The effects (02:05 and later) are sometimes to loud and maybe you like to do them more 'artificial' using some more reverb, echo and modulation?
Yeah; what you hear at 2:26 is a resonance part of a lowpass cut filter im using.
As you wrote, the lead melody needs a bit more work. There is no melody that is remarkable. Try to find a more simple melody.
Yeah i know; especially second part!
But don't understand me wrong. The music is not bad. I like this tune. It is not exactly my kind of music so don't concern to much.
No you had some nice comments
Nice and relaxed
I like number 5 very much.
