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Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 3:52 am
by Mohawk70
It isn't visible in the image ... but the 'ENTER' button text changes to white & the background color changes to a solid blue ( no transparency ) ... when hovered over.
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 4:36 am
by netmaestro
Looks very good! The only suggestion I can think of is to put a drop shadow on the pencil.
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 5:46 am
by Mohawk70
netmaestro wrote:Looks very good!
Thank you
netmaestro wrote:The only suggestion I can think of is to put a drop shadow on the pencil.
That's an excellent suggestion !
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 6:32 am
by Mohawk70
3 quick revisions (this will be my last image post on this thread) , but feel free to post opinions
or choose your favorite of the 4 versions.
Edit #1
Edit # 2
Edit #3

Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 7:03 am
by netmaestro
This is #2 with a dropshadow added to the pencil:

Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 9:56 am
by IdeasVacuum
I'd ditch the graph paper.......
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 10:57 am
by Zach
Ditch the graphs or make them a more traditional "dark" blue. Also need better contrast on the pencil tip. shade it to look like wood and those edges you put in might actually be visible.
Right now the pencil tip doesn't look like anything but an out of place cut diamond with a black tip.
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 12:11 pm
by Josh
Sorry for the hard criticism, but tastes are different. If I where looking for a graphic designer and see such a site, I would say thanks and bye-bye. I have no problems with sites are note perfectly designed, but from a graphic designer I expect a perfect designed site.
Splash page. Who needs that, for what's that? I don't want to press Enter, I want to see the content with calling the site.
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 12:13 pm
by Lord
Shouldn't the pencil look more like this:
(Sorry, I'm not an artist. Just to imagine)

Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 8:02 pm
by Mohawk70
Zach wrote:Ditch the graphs or make them a more traditional "dark" blue. Also need better contrast on the pencil tip. shade it to look like wood and those edges you put in might actually be visible.
Right now the pencil tip doesn't look like anything but an out of place cut diamond with a black tip.
The diamond is actually part of the brand identity used in other products / services ...
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 8:12 pm
by Mohawk70
Josh wrote:Sorry for the hard criticism, but tastes are different. If I where looking for a graphic designer and see such a site, I would say thanks and bye-bye. I have no problems with sites are note perfectly designed, but from a graphic designer I expect a perfect designed site.
Splash page. Who needs that, for what's that? I don't want to press Enter, I want to see the content with calling the site.
The splash page is for allowing the user to choose the option to view the hi-res version of the design gallery instead of forcing it on mobile or other low bandwith connections, and is not the main page of the site.
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 9:04 pm
by Mohawk70
Thanks everyone ! One can always expect honest, unbiased opinions on topics
like these here on the board. Final design done and approved by the client
@NetMaestro : added a drop shadow
@IdeasVacuum & @Zach : Convinced client to drop the background - my opinion
was that it looked too cluttered and busy to begin with.
Now on to the site redesign ...
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Wed Apr 10, 2013 8:13 am
by tj1010
Comparatively speaking it's good, I'm a contractor and see a lot of designs, most god awful and by "professionals". Then again visuals mean nothing if you want to build a community or get traffic, you can have a world class designer do a site for you, but without exclusive or trendy content for whatever the subject, it's just something you pay for with time and money...
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Thu Apr 11, 2013 1:24 pm
by Zach
I would look into alternative means to identify whether or not the user is on a mobile platform, and then do an automatic redirect based on that..
i.e when I'm on my phone, my bank will direct me to a mobile site even if I input the www URL for the main site. I'm actually going to look into this myself for my own site, so I have a mobile version which fits better on phone screens and perhaps serves the PDFs directly instead of a zip file.
Re: Logo / Website Splash Page Critique Please
Posted: Sat Apr 13, 2013 1:45 am
by Mohawk70
Zach wrote:I would look into alternative means to identify whether or not the user is on a mobile platform, and then do an automatic redirect based on that..
I plan on using a responsive design on the revised site, using CSS3 media queries. What I posted was just a quick mockup solely for visual purposes. No need for a redirect at all that way. Thanks anyhow.
