Jan Vooijs wrote:
mmm to be Honest, very interesting BUT (there is allways 'a butt' [note the double t

]).
Oke here goes:
Starts off nice (rythmic), picks up pace, then 1:12 bang you kill the number... silence .. 1:16 pick up in a 'trance mode' now it sounds like a very familiar number from that dutch guy Arnold van Buren...
02:14 it dies again (stupid) them the finale what finale it just dies blub meoiiue kill and some 'residual notes' (very bad).
So on the whole it has potential but you have to work on it. Better is it NOT to 'die' the break but start a 'soft rythem' directly (max 2 sec silence, not 4) so people knows the number is NOT over otherwise the dancing stops (and we do NOT want that). Or keep the base drum running (it is done digital so why not? No sweat is pored.)
Second part needs some work, some more instruments...Pick a choice...
Keep up you have potential in the trance... .
Btw. better to pick your own posting or otherwise people start to 'dump'

there music here and Kukalkan does not want that I think...
Oh and getting the music OUT of your head is the hardest part belief me I know i have tried.
Jan V.
Hi!
First a notice about the "Arnold van Buren" number; never heard of him nor his music, i think its a coincidence. I played it at my midi keyboard (i got myself one of those.. and a midi mixer with some buttons, knobs and sliders to help me mixing and creating..), and thought it sounded cool
About the ending i know its bad i haven't done that part yet

Intro's, fase-shifts and endings are something i really need to work at
But have a long way to go before you match Kukalkan (sorry the Fool)
You don't have to say sorry i know that already
About having my own post; i didn't want to put up something people wouldn't like. Better keep the number of readers a bit down
So on the whole it has potential but you have to work on it. Better is it NOT to 'die' the break but start a 'soft rythem' directly (max 2 sec silence, not 4) so people knows the number is NOT over otherwise the dancing stops (and we do NOT want that). Or keep the base drum running (it is done digital so why not? No sweat is pored.)
Thanks for the suggestions, i will have a look

This is one of the other major things. Shifting between intro's and the actual "melodic" part is a bit hard for me, i need to work a lot on that.
I guess there is always a butt somewhere. Otherwise, i think its rather creepy :d
Oh and getting the music OUT of your head is the hardest part belief me I know i have tried.
Yeah. I think traumatic also mentioned this

A wise man (dagcrack

) once wrote to me that its like a graphics artist. You can imagine the greatest things in your head but without practising it will still look ugly when getting it on the paper
Keep up you have potential in the trance... .
thanks

And i sure will keep it up.